Saturday, November 27, 2010

A Million Little Pieces, Not Dollars

The big papers and magazines are scrambling to scoop each other on the latest James Frey hullabaloo (remember his book, A Million Little Pieces?). He’s now started a book-packaging company called Full Fathom Five. Full Fathom Five will hire young writers to write young adult fiction. His goal is to publish the next Potter-type series.

According to Mediaite, the authors he hires “get $250 upon signing and another $250 upon completion of a book.” He’s had his first major success. A sci-fi story called I Am Number Four is being made into a Michael Bay/Steven Spielberg DreamWorks movie.

According to the Wall Street Journal, Frey “only develops ideas that have serial book potential, as well as obvious film, TV, merchandising and digital marketability. In business about 18 months, he has 28 writers working on 27 book series.” The WSJ quoted the same figures for payment as Mediaite, but added: “They are promised 30% to 49% of all revenue whether it comes from videogames or publications rights.”

So, whose name went on that book-to-movie, I Am Number Four – Frey’s or the contract author? Neither. Frey decided to assign it a moniker of “Pittacus Lore,” a character in the story. The actual writer, Jobie Hughes, sued for a renegotiation of his contract. The suit has been settled and according to the WSJ, the “author” of I Am Number Four will remain Pittacus Lore.

Frey’s company is a machine, churning out books to movies. Full Fathom Five has three series already on the way. According to the site io9, “The Other World Chronicles, a modern-day King Arthur story that Will Smith's son Jaden is already in line to star in the movie version of.”

What do you think? Would you accept $500 to write a book with the hope that it became a major hit and was made into a movie, even if your name would never go on the book but you may get a cut of the movie deal – or you may not?

Would you do it with the idea that it would give you a chance to collaborate with a proven hit-producer?

Thursday, November 25, 2010

Happy Thanksgiving

Hope everyone is having a wonderful day with family and friends. And food, football, books, or whatever makes you happy.

I thought I’d share our menu for this Thanksgiving:

Ham
Marinated Artichoke Hearts
Breakaway Bread
Asian Cole Slaw
Candied Yams
Relish Tray
Mississippi Mud Cake

Turkey is our traditional meat for Thanksgiving, but this year I decided to serve it for Christmas when my daughter will be home.

Marinated Artichoke Hearts is my husband’s favorite and Breakaway Bread is my son’s. Candied Yams is a new recipe I’m trying out and Mississippi Mud Cake is a recipe from an aunt in Alabama who is a fabulous cook.

What are you cooking? And what special thing do you have planned for the day?

Wednesday, November 24, 2010

Publishing for Kindle

If you’re thinking of e-publishing (perhaps that NaNo you’re working on now?), here’s an article that might be helpful. It’s called “How to Publish a Kindle eBook.” The post is on Blog Kindle, Daily news About Kindle, eBooks, eInk and other related topics.

Step 1: Create an Account
Step 2: Format your eBook
Step 3: Upload Your Book
Step 4: Promote it.

Within the article, you’ll find some basic tips, such as do your editing before you upload your book – Kindle will NOT edit for you.

Also, he recommends “Unencrypted Mobipocket” as the “ideal” format for Kindle.

He even tells you how to “test” your book, save yourself some trouble, and see how your book will look on the Kindle, before you upload it.

Easy, right?

Saturday, November 20, 2010

Computer Gaming

My third book with TSTC Publishing may be coming out soon. I say “may” since I’ve heard nothing from the publisher about it. Earlier this week, I saw that it is listed on AmazonUK as available for pre-order, although no release date was mentioned. So I went over to AmazonUSA to check there. It lists it as scheduled for release on December 1 of this year.

Apparently, they both have the same cover …


… although slightly different titles. It appears in the UK, it’ll be listed as Computer Gaming (TechCareers) and in the US, its title will be listed as TechCareers: Gaming Programmers and Artists. Different titles in different countries is not unusual.

I’m looking forward to seeing the book firsthand. I’m not holding my breath, though, since the book is not listed on TSTC’s site.

In case you’re wondering how I found out about Computer Gaming since I’ve not heard from the publisher … I have a Google alert on my name and it popped up there. I have alerts on my name, the name of my blog, and several other things. How many of you have an alert on your name? Why not?

Thursday, November 18, 2010

Theme Me Up, Scotty

Today, Carolyn J. Rose, author of many books, including two series, is stopping by to tell us how she found the theme of her book.

 Carolyn J. Rose grew up in New York’s Catskill Mountains, graduated from the University of Arizona, logged two years in Arkansas with Volunteers in Service to America, and spent 25 years as a television news researcher, writer, producer, and assignment editor in Arkansas, New Mexico, Oregon, and Washington. She teaches novel-writing in Vancouver, Washington, and founded the Vancouver Writers’ Mixers. Her hobbies are reading, gardening, and not cooking. (Hey! Two out of three of those are my hobbies, too!)

 On many of her books, her husband is her co-author. Mike Nettleton grew up in Bandon and Grants Pass, Oregon. A stint at a college station in Ashland led to a multi-state radio odyssey with on-air gigs in Oregon, California, and New Mexico under the air name Mike Phillips. In 1989 he returned to the Northwest and in 1994 joined KEX Radio in Portland. His hobbies are golf, pool, Texas hold-em poker, and book collecting. (Look at that! I collect books. My husband and I are Texans, and we’re partners in a golf company. That makes us kissin’ cousins, without the kissing part.)

Welcome Carolyn J. Rose.

Theme me up, Scotty.
Or you say message, and I say I need a massage.

By Carolyn J. Rose

I have never been known for my fast reflexes and hand-eye coordination. Back in high school, I couldn’t hit a tennis ball, couldn’t connect with a baseball, and seldom ducked in time to avoid a spit wad in the eye.

But in English class, I was a blur of action when we finished reading a short story and Miss Smith asked that inevitable question, “Who can tell me the theme of this?”

Slap. I’d shove my pencil and notebook off the edge of my desk.

Whack. They’d hit the floor.

Whoosh. I’d dive down to retrieve them, letting loose a flutter of paper and fumbling the pencil across the aisle.

While I was retrieving and reorganizing—a process I could stretch out for at least two minutes—someone else would take a stab at the answer.

I was an A student, I read constantly, and I wrote poetry, but no way could I figure out the theme of the stories we read back then. “The Gift of the Magi.” Hmmm. “The Ransom of Red Chief.” Uhhhhh. “The Open Window.” Ummm.

Even when I emerged from beneath the desk and heard Miss Smith summarize the theme, the information didn’t seem to connect to anything in the story or in my brain. And how she came up with it remained a mystery.

I can’t remember what I was thinking when I went to college with the goal of someday becoming an English teacher. I guess maybe I thought there would be answer keys I could use. Or that I could somehow fake it. Or that my students would be expert theme analyzers and decoders.

After graduation, I went down a long detour, into VISTA and then into TV news. The word “theme” never came up until Mike and I had finished writing The Hard Karma Shuffle and were spending a few days with friends at the Oregon Writers Colony house in Rockaway.

“What’s the theme of the book?” a fellow writer asked after she’d read a few chapters.

I ducked my head, figuring that Mike would field that question. And he did. “It doesn’t have one,” he said without a second of hesitation and without a trace of doubt.

“What?” the writer gasped. “It has to. Every book has a theme.”

Mike gave me a deer-caught-in-the-headlights look and, with cat-like reflexes, I made an excuse to escape. “Tide’s out. If we’re going to walk the beach, we’ve got to leave now.”

Chastened, feeling we’d been caught masquerading as writers, we stomped through the sand for hours, trying to dredge up a theme for a book filled with thugs, muggings, car chases, and snappy comebacks. Other than the usual justice-related theme of mysteries, we came up with exactly nothing.

Driven inside by a squall and the rising tide, we found our fellow writer circling a sentence near the end of the book. “Here’s your theme,” she said. “If you know the terms, you’re okay.”

We nodded like bobble-head dolls and bolted to our room where we admitted to each other that if indeed this was the theme, it certainly hadn’t been intentional.

A few years later we wrote a sequel, The Crushed Velvet Miasma. We used a similar manic formula for the plot and brought back most of the same characters. If the book has a theme, it’s news to me. In fact, if someone found the message of the story, I’d be hard-pressed to pick it out of a theme line-up.

But then we rented the movie Speechless and, as Michael Keaton, referring to that classic 1950s TV series Lassie, explained the “You see, Timmie” concept to Geena Davis, we finally understood. Theme is a take-out box filled with a message about the world—the real world, the fictional world, or both.

 Having gleaned that bit of knowledge, I no longer dive under my desk at the sound of the word “theme.” I’ve come to see that there are messages in every story—some huge, some spiritual, some life-altering, some amusing. I can even identify themes in some of my recent books. Hemlock Lake: the present can be held hostage by the past. Sometimes a Great Commotion: fanaticism can create chaos.

Do I now identify the themes of a story before I begin to write it?

Ooopps.

There goes that darn pencil again.

I’ll be under the desk if you need me.

Thank you Carolyn.

You can find out more about Carolyn and Mike on their website, Deadly Duo Mysteries. All of their books are listed on their site. As a bonus, you can read an excerpt from Sometimes A Great Commotion. Look for Carolyn’s books on Amazon or check out the Links page for stores and her publishers’ websites..

Please leave a comment or question for Carolyn.

I’ll start the questions off:
When you and Mike are coming up with the idea or theme for the next book, does one of you take the lead in the ideas, or do you toss around ideas then eventually narrow down the choices and plot points?

Wednesday, November 17, 2010

Carolyn J. Rose

 Tomorrow, Carolyn J. Rose, author of the Deadly Duo Mysteries and the Devil’s Harbor series, will be stopping by Straight From Hel to talk about identifying the theme of your stories.

 Sometimes, Carolyn writes solo; sometimes she co-authors with Mike Nettleton. On her website, this is how she describes co-writing a book: “an undertaking that ranks right up there with roller skating on a calving glacier during a moderate earthquake.” The latest in the Devil’s Harbor Mysteries, co-authored with Nettleton, is called Sometimes A Great Commotion.

Here’s the book trailer for Rose and Nettleton’s book, Sometimes A Great Commotion.



If you’re like me, you hoped you’d never have to think about the “theme” of a book once you left college. If you’re a writer, though, it keeps coming up. Your agent asks you what the theme is. Your editor wants to know. And just when you think you’re done with it, someone stands up during your talk at a bookstore and asks about the theme of your latest book.

If you know the theme of your book, leave it in the comments box. If you don’t (and even if you do), come back tomorrow to read how Carolyn J. Rose found her theme (and maybe even her groove).

Saturday, November 13, 2010

An Opportunity

Here’s an opportunity for each of you to participate in a book. A friend of mine is writing a non-fiction book. As part of her research, she’s conducting a survey.

The survey is online and consists of 25 questions, all but one are multiple choice. She estimated that it might take 10 minutes to answer the questions. It took me much less time. You just read the question and click on the answer that most fits you, then move on to the next one.

The questionnaire is anonymous. If you’d like to expand on your answers, there is a box at the end where you can enter your name and email – but you certainly don’t have to.

Since this is a personal friend of mine, I can vouch that this is a legitimate project. (And the survey is easy.)

So, if you’d like to participate, this is the link to the Rock-Water-Sky-Green survey:

http://www.surveymonkey.com/s/LLCQ76T

She’s hoping to get 1,000 people to take the survey. Thanks to all of you who have the time to take the survey and help her out.

Thursday, November 11, 2010

Character Arc

 Today, Stephen Tremp, author of Breakthrough, talks about Character Arc, what it is and how it plays into the success of your book. You can leave questions or comments for Stephen after today’s post.

Welcome Stephen Tremp.

Character Arc: character arc is an inferred emotional or psychological development of a character as it unfolds throughout the story. Character arc is absolutely fundamental to story success. According to Larry Brooks it’ s not only how the character learns and grows as a result of their experiences within the story, but how they apply that learning toward their role as the primary catalyst in bringing about the conclusion of the story.

If the hero has something to learn at the beginning of the story (which should be the case), if they demonstrate (or hide) shortcomings and faults that are constantly separating them from what they need and want to achieve, chances are those are the consequences of having some inner demon that influences their decisions and actions. Where that inner demon comes from is backstory.

Character arc and the conflict and tension it causes the main character forms the basis for many movies. The character has a particular viewpoint and through trials and tribulations, his viewpoint is changed, for better or worse. Preferably, the character overcomes his flaws and there is a happy ending or justice is served.

Example: In Michael Clayton, George Clooney’s character starts off with a major weakness: he is cynical and sees no admiral qualities in what he’s doing personally or professionally. However, by the end of the story, he changes completely in order to do the right thing. Storyline: A law firm brings in its "fixer" to remedy the situation after a lawyer has a breakdown while representing a chemical company that he knows is guilty in a multi-billion dollar class action suit.

In one of my daughter’s favorite movies, Beauty and the Beast, we easily see character arc unfold as the story progresses:

Simplified breakdown:
1. Good looking prince who’s overconfident in himself (Flaws: arrogance and inability to love)
2. The prince gets turned into a monster and we learn that the spell can only be broken when he finds someone who loves him for who he really is (inner beauty)
3. He meets Belle, she’s reluctant at first but then through knowing and caring for her, he gets a more sympathetic heart and she learns to understand him.
4. His arrogance and inability to love is overcome. End of story. His lesson is learned.
Lights Film School

Equal Time: there are those who believe character arc is not all about change. Rather it is about growth. They will site examples such as Braveheart and The Fugitive. “Growth is all about whether or not the character is moving towards something or away from something - not whether or not they change. You can grow as a person and still hold on to your beliefs - they just get stronger.” Jim Hull .

Please join me tomorrow as I visit Kelly Polark’s blog as we talk about Writers Block.

Stephen Tremp is author of the action thriller Breakthrough. You can visit Stephen at Breakthrough Blogs where Breakthrough is available for purchase and download to all eReaders.

If you feel this blog is worthy, go ahead and make my day.

 Thank you Stephen.

How about all of you reading Stephen’s post today: Do you chart your protagonist’s arc in your manuscript? Before you begin writing do you know how that character will change over the course of the book? Any questions or comments for Stephen?

And if you have any questions for me about Research, that's the topic I'm addressing today over on The Blood Red Pencil.

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

Book Review: Breakthrough

 Breakthrough: The Adventures of Chase Manhattan by Stephen Tremp is a thriller. The backcover blurb is very long, so I’m shortening it here.
A group of graduate students from Massachusetts Institute of Technology, has stolen a breakthrough in opening and stabilizing Einstein-Rosen Bridges, commonly known as wormholes, that allows them to instantly transport people from one location to another. Their goal is to assassinate any powerful politician and executive controlling the world’s banking system that would use this technology for their own greedy gain rather than the advancement of man.

In south Orange County, California, young Chase Manhattan, part of a new breed of modern-day discovery seekers, seeks to leave behind his life of danger and adventure and settle down as an associate professor of physics at University of California-Irvine. He also desires to build a lasting relationship with a beautiful woman he has not seen since high school….

As the death toll mounts, Chase and his friends must battle this group of misled zealots from M.I.T. on both coasts and in cyberspace in a thrilling, desperate race to determine the outcome of this monumental, once in a millennium discovery that will drastically change life as we know it – for better or worse.
Breakthrough is sort of a scientific James Bond book. Chase Manhattan has money, brains, beautiful evil women who have sex with him, then try to kill him, the martial arts skills and quick thinking to equal his adversaries, and a crew of friends willing to back him up and even go into the fire with him.

You don’t have to worry that you might get lost in the technology of wormholes. Tremp keeps it understandable and since the M.I.T. group has already accomplished transporting through space, there are no long passages explaining Einstein-Rosen Bridges.

Tremp has come up with a new twist on the action-adventure and given this modern-day Bond a team with the expertise to back him up. Chase Manhattan has the knowledge and skills to go up against the M.I.T. gang.

I would have liked more background on Chase and his life as a “discovery-seeker” so I could understand how he came to be so skilled in martial arts, wealthy, and passionate about righting wrong.

Another thing that bothered me is that although I knew this was part of a series (“The Adventures of Chase Manhattan”), I expected it to be a stand-alone within the series, with a beginning and a wrap-up. It is not. It is an installment that continues in the next book.

So, I’ll be looking forward to the next book and finding out how Chase stops the beautiful assassin, kills the main bad guy and then decides what to do with this amazing, yet potentially earth-shattering technology.

Since this is the first in the series, I give Breakthrough a Hel-O!

Breakthrough
ISBN 978-0-595-47400-4 (sc)
ISBN 978-0-595-71070-6 (dj)
ISBN 978-0-595-91677-1 (ebook)
Publisher: iUniverse
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FTC Disclaimer: This book was sent to me by Stephen Tremp, an online friend and the author of Breakthrough. Knowing him as a fellow blogger did not influence my review, nor did the fact that he autographed the book. What did influence me were two of the characters: Chase Manhattan, because he’s rich as all get-out and can afford to rent a plane at the drop of a hat to fly him and his crew across the country and stay in expensive hotels; and Susan, Chase’s girlfriend, whom I wanted to strangle. Chase gets the crap beat out of him by the beautiful assassin with whom he’s spent the night having wild sex, then Susan rushes over to care for him. Grr. Having growled that, my strong feelings about these two characters show that Stephen Tremp did a good job of bringing his characters to life.

Come back tomorrow when Stephen Tremp will be here to talk about Character Arcs.

Saturday, November 06, 2010

Be Careful What You Wish For

Writers have many dreams. We dream of finding an agent, of selling our manuscript to a publisher, of holding our book in our hands, of seeing our books in a bookstore, of someone asking us to autograph a copy of our book, of a director buying the rights to our book, and on and on. Maybe that last one, having our book made into a movie or television show, should be put into the nightmare list.

Zip over and see the list of “Worst Television Versions of Science Fiction and Fantasy Books” – and the video clips to prove why each was included in the list. Here’s the winners … or losers in this case:
A Wrinkle in Time
The Martian Chronicles
Earthsea
Riverworld
Legend of the Seeker
Day of Triffids
Eastwick
FlashForward
Trucks!
The Andromeda Strain

Watch the videos and then tell us what you think about the list. Do you agree? Is there one that should have been on the list, but wasn’t?

Thursday, November 04, 2010

Book Review: The Bed Book of Short Stories

 I used to say, I haven’t read short stories since college literature classes. I can’t say that now since I’m reading more of them lately. I just finished The Bed Book of Short Stories.

The stories in The Bed Book of Short Stories were written by authors, some new, some well-known and established, from Africa. There you have the first common denominator – they are all African writers. The second commonality among the stories is that in each of them a bed played a role.

The idea of “bed” being a thread throughout the book interested me. I admit, though, knowing the writers were all from Africa intrigued me since just about all the books I read are by American, Canadian, or British authors. I thought that The Bed Book of Short Stories would take me to places I’d never been before. It did. And I wasn’t disappointed.

Some stories will make you smile. Some will make you cry. All are well-written and compelling. In some, the bed is a comfy mattress. In others, it is a rolled up pad on your back as you trudge through heat and pain trying to reach a safe-haven.

I loved all the stories, but the one that still plays in my mind is Stains Like A Map by Jayne Bauling. It’s brilliantly told in first person. You live in a woman’s head as her life undergoes major changes, from her marriage bed to hauling that bed on her back as she and her husband walk through heat and exhaustion for days, trying to reach a better life. She experiences great loss and depressing fear, but trudges forward. By the end of the story, I had to put down the book since I was crying too hard to read another one.

But I did later go on to read all of the stories. I would recommend that you, too, read all of them. They can give you a new perspective on life, happiness, suffering, and joy.

I give The Bed Book of Short Stories a Hel-Yeah.

The Bed Book of Short Stories
ISBN-13: 9781920397319 (B&N U.S.)
ISBN 978-1-920397-31-9 (On copyright page)
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FTC Disclaimer: This book was sent to me by Judy Croome, an online friend. Knowing her as a fellow blogger did not influence my review, nor did the fact that 7 of the writers autographed the book. What did influence me was the excellent writing and being introduced to cultures and people new to me. One thing that struck me is that perhaps because the closest I've been to Africa is Morocco, although I would love to go, I tend to think of Africa as one big place. But it is not. The writers hail from South Africa, Botswana, Zimbabwe, Mozambique, Malawi, Namibia and Zambia. Each writer had a different perspective and different story. Joanne Hichens, who edited the book, said this in her Introduction: “As South Africans, we have the distinct privilege of being exposed to, and being part of the fabric made up of a range of cultures. Inviting writers from beyond the borders to submit work meant that stories were drawn from an even more vast store of experience.” I would add that reading stories from this wide range of writers took me beyond the borders of the U.S. and thus broadened my life.

Wednesday, November 03, 2010

Double Duty

A blog entry on PennLive serves double duty for writers. First off, it gives good advice on finding an agent. The author of Writers Gone Wild, Bill Peschel, lists and explains these steps:
Get Critiqued
Take a Class
Join the Club
Create Your Query
Prepare to Propose
Go Agent Hunting
Beware of Scams
Sign on the Line
The Path to Publication

These steps work for both fiction and non-fiction, although if you write fiction, in my opinion, you can skip “Prepare to Propose” in your action plan.

The second duty this article does is show how you can promote your book without making a hard sell and turning off possible readers. Yes, Peschel mentions his book in the second paragraph. And, yes, he includes a large image of his book cover. Then in the final section, he lists examples from his book of Publishing Perils. But the majority and the focus of his piece is on giving valuable advice to other writers. He doesn’t mention the book throughout the piece over and over. He never asks you to buy his book – not even as a wrap-up at the end of the piece.

He mentions the book, gives examples from it, shows the cover. He never hard sells. And he provides information worth reading. That’s how to sell your book without sounding like you’re trying to sell your book.

What do you think? Do you prefer the soft sell or the buy-my-book sell?
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