I’ve mentioned our miniature Schnauzer, Ruffles, before. Well, she’s baaaacckk! To review for those who are new… Ruffles is 15 and a half years old, almost blind and mostly deaf. She can’t come down the stairs by herself and getting up is a struggle, so I’ll most likely soon be carrying her up, as well as down. She still has her internal clock, though it runs a bit fast. About an hour before dinnertime, she wakes and begins pacing. She sleeps either in my office or by my side of the bed. If I’m in my office and I see her even open her eyes, I grab her up and run her outside. You can guess why. At bedtime, I take her out then she gets three treats, one right away, one to entice her to climb the stairs by herself and one to get her to find her bed.
You’re probably wondering what all this has to do with writing. Well…I was watching her and thinking how like a little old lady she is - to tell you the truth, I hope I’m as spry when I get 15 in dog years - and that led me to imagining her as a character.
At her age, she’s a character in shades of black and light. If you write a character who’s not blind, but rather with very poor eyesight, then you are writing a character in shades of black and light. When I’m outside with Ruffles during the day, she can see me if I’m close, within a couple of feet from her. She can also see me if I’m three to maybe six feet if I’m moving. (I’ve learned to sway back and forth or wave my arms to catch her attention.) If we’re out at night, even with the floodlights, she doesn’t see nearly as well as when we’re in daylight. I have to stay right by her side. When we get through with business and walk to the porch, she sees even less. The porch lights are on, but they're dim. She sometimes will go round and round in circles as if she can’t see me or the door.
Keep Ruffles in mind when you write a sight impaired person. Such a person might totally miss something in the dark, but be able to see a bit in the bright daylight. They, too, live in shades of black and light.
And if your character is as small as Ruffles, you’d better keep your eyes open and watch your step. She wants to lead and stay close, so she weaves in and out of your feet and back and forth in front of you. She is, in this house, still the lead dog.
11 months ago
That's interesting to study Ruffles to determine how a person with limited sight would react! Makes total sense but I don't think I would have thought of it.
ReplyDeleteOur dog will be 14 at the end of the year and she seems to see okay, but we can tell she can't hear that well anymore. It's sad to watch people and animals age.
ReplyDeleteGood point about keeping our characters real! We have to really think about their limitations but also their abilities. I have an elderly sleuth and think hard about some of the challenges she faces because of her age.
ReplyDeleteI read an article that pets were the #1 cause of falls in the home! I can believe it. My cats and corgi are very much like Ruffles.
Elizabeth
Mystery Writing is Murder
Good points here. I think we can learn lots of stuff from our house pets. My brother has a cat that reminds me of a haughty queen or something. The way she demands what she wants when she wants it but turns her nose up at you if YOU want to start a play game or pet her when YOU want to. lol
ReplyDeleteBut yeah - the eyesight thing - I haven't written a blind or partially blind person yet, and these are good things to remember.
The Old Silly
Your post touched me on a couple of different levels... My husband has a 16 year old cockerpoo (mix of cocker spaniel and poodle). She's a little old lady who is deaf in both ears, blind in one eye and arthitis in her back legs, so I understand the need to help her get up from the bed. Sometimes she has really good days and she'll act like a puppy. She's a sweetheart.... The other thing you're post touched on was sight... my mom is legally blind (that's WITH glasses - she's still legally blind). I wrote a lot about her on my blog in the past. I just wanted to thank you for your post!
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing where we can get our research from, right before our eyes! Ruffles sounds so sweet, she is blessed to have you caring so thoughtfully for her (another trait we can bring to our work!)
ReplyDeleteLittle Beau, or Yorkie, is also getting upthere is doggie years, Its sad to see him struggle up and down the stairs so we put up a child proof gate to keep the old fella downstairs where its safe. Hey, maybe Ruffles and Beau could get together sometime. Shar doggie stories. Or sleep.
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Your post is a good reminder of how ideas for characters can come from the most unusual sources - if we keep our minds open.
ReplyDeleteWhat a good point, Helen, on writing realistic characters. And that's how we learn to do it, by observation and translate that observation into our work.
ReplyDeleteStill, what a sweet baby you have. None of mine are that old yet.
We don't have to block the stairs anymore 'cause the only time Ruffles attempts them is when I walk with her, it's bedtime, and she knows there will be treats.
ReplyDeleteWhen writing characters who are blind or deaf, it's good to remember that there are degrees. A character whom everyone refers to as deaf may be able to hear some things when there's no background noise, for example. This could play into a plot.
Interesting mix of pet stories and writing tips. Maybe that is why so many of us writers have pets and are so in tuned to them. We instinctively see a connection between animal behavior and human behavior.
ReplyDeleteOur little dog is about 14. Partially deaf, unless I say "treat" and almost blind. She still roams our property pretty widely, so I am always having to watch that she doesn't go on the road. She used to be good about staying off of it, but I don't think she knows now that she has strayed too far. I'm trying to train the big dog to watch after her, but all the big dog wants is to chase the ball.
I love that you're trying to train the big dog to take care of the older dog, Maryann. I know what you mean about your dog wandering. Ruffles rarely went out of our yard, but now that she's mostly deaf and blind, she's twice wandered off. Luckily, both times a neighbor has found her and held her until we got there. She'd never see or hear a car coming until it was too late.
ReplyDeleteHaving Ruffles around is sort of like having a subject to study.
I love your Ruffles, even though I've never met her. These are good things to remember. Thanks for this post.
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice post, Helen, with some good writing tips! I love to hear about Ruffles, who sounds like a very sweet dog.
ReplyDeleteElspeth
She is sweet, Elspeth, but she didn't use to be. My daughter used to call her the devil dog. Ahh, but that's a whole other post.
ReplyDeleteInteresting analogy!
ReplyDeleteAnd I hope I get along as well as Ruffles at that age, too. Although someone carrying me up and down the stairs would be wonderful...
This is just a charming post, Helen. I’m an animal lover and fell instantly in love with Ruffles. You obviously take good care of her, she appreciates it, I know. Thank you from her. Alexis Grant had a dog post today, too. As I told her, there’s a special place in heaven for folks who care for animals…especially if they need help. You’re in.
ReplyDeleteBest Regards, Galen
Imagineering Fiction Blog
Dogs actually teach us a lot about life. As a comedian once said, "A dog loses its leg, it just looks down and says, 'Oh. Guess I just have three legs now,' and hobbles off. A man loses a leg and every time he gets drunk, you've gotta hear the story of how he lost his leg..." Something like that!
ReplyDeleteVery nice advice. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteStephanie, you made me laugh. I hadn't heard that joke.
ReplyDeleteSometimes it's hard for us to imagine a disability well. How blindness affects movement, how long an injury can take to heal, how things like this change the character's perception of the world. This is a great reminder!
ReplyDelete(Also, your dog sounds adorable.)
Thanks, Helen. This is great writing advice for developing characters. It's also good advice for dealing with people who have disabilities. Our animals can teach us a lot.
ReplyDeleteI never thought about turning my pets into human characters. We have a crazy cock-a-poo, who's the sweetest dog I've ever seen, and a Yorkie who was abused as a puppy and who was terrified of everything until we got her, and spoiled her rotten. I don't apologize for that: she deserved to be spoiled after the miserable early life she led.
Hmm. I think they would each make interesting characters!
It's hard to imagine writing about someone who's blind or deaf when I haven't experienced those things myself. You've discovered an interesting way to imagine what's it like. Clever, but terribly poignant.
ReplyDeleteHelen, you have great observation and association skills. The Australian Dancing with the Stars has a blind contestant last season. It was amazing to hear how he had to rely on touch and distance to dance. And of course, it's more amazing to watch him dance.
ReplyDeleteSteamy Darcy